And that was the awful truth keeping me from ever being honest with Spencer.
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-15 11:17:32 PMdies
Why do you do this to me woman?! I mean, that conversation with (Confucius) Ryan at the end, what a way to pack a punch.
sighs and shakes head
What is it with us and our need to write Spencer fic's where there's a damaged girl and Spencer comes in and saves her? I swear, there should be more of those fics. Spencer could totally rock the 'knight in shining armour' role. Hey, don't hate; I could totally see it happening! XD
P.S As I was reading the thing about dads, How I Go by Yellowcard came on, which is a song that is based on the movie Big Fish, which is about a father-son relationship. Listening to that song and reading that... Yeah. Jackhammer straight to the heart, straight and simple.
Author's responseHaha, that's some Harry Potter shit right there.
He is such a knight in shining armor rock star! It's like destined for him to be written as such. :D
Well, that worked out perfectly then! I love when music ties things in nicely, causing a profound emotional moment.
Thanks for the review. :D As always, you make me feel like a better writer than I am lol.
- Again, another emotionally honest chapter. This is why I really like your leading ladies; with any other writer they'd probably come off as a mary sue but you're honest through them and there's no fake emotions or witty comebacks or poetically worded screaming rants (if by poetic, I mean littered with f-bombs =P).
Author's response=D Well, I'm very glad that you do. I can't stand overly scream-filled scenes or where they are just going back and forth. (I mean that works, but usually not when actual emotion is present or supposed to be present)
Is there another type of poetic demonstrated on this site? Haha.
(Other than your wonderful poems.)