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"You were looking too hard to see." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
(#) snake56tongue 2012-04-16 05:41:44 AMWow. This is beautiful.
I don't know if this is what it is about, but I feel as if it between to ex-lovers, and about someone who has been held too tight, not given enough freedom, and although they love each other, the girl can't bear being in the relationship anymore.
That is probably extremely off the mark, but thats kinda how I see it.
Also, I love the way you rhyme poems, like different from normal, but still really nice :)
Author's responseThank you very much.
I can definitely see why you think that's what this poems's about, even if that's not exactly what I had in mind when I wrote it.
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-16 08:23:09 AMBeautiful. It kinda reminded me of Demolition Lovers in some respects, although it definitely had a voice of its own. Love it.
Favourite Line: 'But you were looking too hard to see.' So much truth in that.
Author's responseThank you very much! It's so cool that this reminds you of Demo Lovers, that feels like a huge compliment!
Thanks for taking the time to review! :D