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Monster.

"The darkness that gleams, and silence that screams." Just a poem I wrote. Would really love to hear what you guys think (:

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/04/21 - Updated: 2012/04/28 - 157 words

Reviews

• Monster.

  (#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-28 06:25:42 AM

  Beautiful.
  The words went together beautifully and the overall feel was creepy and just perfect.
  Definitely sad and easily relate-able.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much, I'm glad you think it's easy to relate to. It was supposed to be a tad creepy so, thanks again, it means a lot.

• Monster.

  (#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-28 08:01:57 AM

  Duuude, this was brilliant! So morbid yet beautiful and true at the same time. I loved it. Very relatable and it flowed beautifully. Into my favourites it goes...thanks for sharing! You're very talented.
  
  CosmicZombie xo

  Author's response

  Thank you for reviewing! This review just like, made me smile so much. I'm glad you liked the flow, I sometimes think my poems don't flow as well as they could. And thank you for favouriting and saying it was quite morbid, that's what I was tryna go for!

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