(#) LanaKrueger 2012-04-23Okay, I thought nothing can top Your fireflies - my absolute favourite poem -, but I was wrong. This is so honest and raw, beautiful and perfect, I can't find the right words to tell you how amazing it is. [maybe that's because I don't speak English well enough ^^"] I really needed this, it made me feel like I'm not going through this alone and that's something I only feel when I'm listening to music, so thank you for being amazing and being yourself. I wish you had more confidence, I don't think you realise how talented and awesome you are!
And I wish someone would write melodies for your poems and lyrics, people need real music with a real message and that's something that can be found in everything you write :]
Author's responseThis review made my day, thank you so much, honey :'D Seriously...ahh, just THANK YOU :'D
- That was really good. I loved the line where you said "No one wants to hear. No one wants to see". It was a bit standard at first, but then I hit those lines and I felt like had been transported and it just changed the entire mood for me. I liked this poem better than some of your others, because I feel like I can relate to this theme pretty well. It feels like exhausted youth or something along those lines that I can't phrase right. Thank you for posting!!!
Author's responseI'm glad you liked it...yeah, I did feel it was sort of cliched, but I tried to make it original too, y'know? Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing! :D
(#) detonationmouse 2012-04-24THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!! Totally blew me away! You are such a great writer, you write with emotion, passion, and truth. I've read some of your other works (which, I might add are fan-fuckin-tastic) but this is amazing! Where did you learn to write like that? Honestly, I could never top that. . . Of the many Ficwad writers on here, you are one of the best. I am such a fan of your stories. Please keep writing. We need people like you. :)
xx Allie :3
Author's responseHoney, thank you so fucking much! This review cheered me up a hell of a lot; THANK YOU :'D I'm so happy you think that and thanks so much for taking the time to review :D
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