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I speak in tongues when I go insane

by ImJustFine 2 Reviews

Imagine a buzzing crowd. City white-noise. Then make the sound distant.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/05/10 - Updated: 2012/05/10 - 151 words - Complete

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  • I speak in tongues when I go insane

    (#) aweirdtree 2012-05-14 05:26:14 AM

    for some reason, i loved the very ending very much... cannot explain myself, again, but thanks for writing that (:

    Author's response

    Oo, thank you! You're so sweet as usual :)
  • I speak in tongues when I go insane

    (#) AdnarimSmada 2012-05-25 10:50:02 AM

    Wow. It's describing the cycle of depression isn't it? (A few of your stanzas gave me that impression, I might be wrong but you are very talented with both your words and your symbolism.)

    I don't know how good I am at interpretation here but that's what I got out of this.

    -Adnarim Smada

    Author's response

    Ah, yes indeed. I would say it is. And thank you so very much, it means a lot yo hear you say I do well with symbolism, because, well. I've never really thought about it. Symbols and metaphors just... slip out? Does that make sense? That I can write a poem that I think is about, say, a dying soldier, and then... I come out of my daze and read trough it and I just go "Oh. It's about bullying. Huh"

    -ImJustFine

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