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Mazes and Resurrections
6 reviewsDarker!Harry - Champions disappear from the maze and return later to a horror-scene. Months later, Harry returns from France. How deep in the Dark Arts did he fall? Is Fleur's love enough to save h...
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When A Veela Cries
(#) garsdal 2012-04-14
This is good stuff, i quite enjoyed it.
I also see a great many opportunities for what is about to happen, a good potential to evolve and a clear, logical diversion from canon. That last part is quite rare, normally things just randomly change at some point of choosing, having a massive occ moment for plots sake, but you managed to make a straight change without any moments of occ. Perhaps aside from Krum? But i don't really know anything about him, so you could easily convince me of anything there.Author's response
Thanks. The change to Krum is important later on. For the rest, I appreciate the words. Laughing at the "OCC" plot changes.When A Veela Cries
(#) Nakor 2012-04-14
Nice change, a pity they didn't manage to bring Peter's or Cedric's body with them.
But it seems in your world Fudge won't be able to deny what happened!
Hope to read soon what happened at Hogwarts ...Author's response
Chapters three and four answer your point specifically. From this point the divergence into the AU world is complete, with very little that represents books five and six. Hope you enjoy the story.When A Veela Cries
(#) Cateagle 2012-04-14
That was quite the evil cliffie and I'm going to be looking forward to seeing what happened at Hogwarts as well as what other evil Tom and his minions have accomplished. You've managed a nice Point of Divergence and I'm looking forwad to seeing where this goes.Author's response
If you think that's an evil cliffy.... It's not that I mean for it to happen, it's just the best breaks in the story line and yeah, there are quite a few of them like that in Part 1 especially.
Glad you're on board for the tale.When A Veela Cries
(#) ddnl1 2012-05-13
That's an evil cliff hanger! I'm hooked now, I really can't wait to read the next chapter!When A Veela Cries
(#) popaul75 2012-08-03
hello I'm sorry but my English has written is very bad taste but I can probably help you I am French. If you need help for translation you can email me at this address paul.thibaul @ gmail.com
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