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Die.

by BJAisgod 1 Reviews

"Tears stream down your featureless face, hope protruding from tired eyes." A slightly bizzare poem I wrote. Feedback would be wizard.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/05/13 - Updated: 2012/05/29 - 198 words

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  • Die.

    (#) CosmicZombie 2012-06-01 01:32:49 PM

    That was brilliant. I don't really know what to say; it was just awesome, and the acrostic message just completely it perfectly.
    Loved it, honey. Keep writing!

    CosmicZombie xo

    Author's response

    Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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