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Now I'm Really Not Okay...

by KilljoyKid 2 Reviews

Frank and Gee are heading to their classes, taking the same route. Everything is going well... will it stay that way?

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2012/05/14 - Updated: 2012/05/14 - 1560 words

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  • I'm Not Okay

    (#) RockMusic 2012-05-14 11:18:50 AM

    Can't really right from 1st person either. Just keep working on it. Something that helps is, I'm not sure if everyone does this. But sometimes I'll get inner monologues throughout my day, that's kind of what 1st person is. So you channel that and theme write it down. Also, the plot to this is really good and I see it going somewhere :). Keep up the writing, every spare time you have just write and you will gradually get better. Even if it's just journaling or random short stories about unicorns.

    Author's response

    Thanks for the review, sorry it took so long to reply to... well, I have three months of summer holidays starting Saturday, so I will have PLENTY of time to write :) I plan to make it a little project to look up short story/essay titles and write stories around them in first person- My Chemical Romance ones of course :) Thank you for the advice also, I mentioned you in the A/N of the next chapter (3 I think).
  • I'm Not Okay

    (#) mom2masonandcole 2012-05-14 12:35:33 PM

    I really like this one keep writing!

    Author's response

    I have :) Next chapter may be delayed, I start exams tomorrow- wish me luck D:

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