(#) LanaKrueger 2012-05-19I know I'll probably sound like a fangirl, but OH MY F*CKING GOD, this is perfect. Seriously, this is a masterpiece! My favourite part is:
it's so true and I had to read it again and again to process its awesomeness :D Someone really has to make a beautiful melody for this! When I was reading it, I thought of Give me novacaine by Green Day - I know it was inspired by MCR, but for some reason, I imagined a kind of slower, simple melody, that'd make a nice contrast with the powerful lyrics - :] Your poems and lyrics are always so meaningful and thought-provoking, and your style is flawless!
- Aw, I really liked that. Thanks for posting another song. I practically felt like I was listening to it, and I was trying to imagine what genre it would be and what the tune would sound like. I really liked the part where you kept saying "Diffuse me." I know that it's the song title and everything, but I was just imagining it to be punk-pop almost Fall Out Boy-ish. I don't know if you like that kind of music of if that offends you, but it went well with my mood and made it seem a bit more relatable. Thank you for posting!!
(#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2012-05-21oh my. this is amazing!! wow why are you actually the most amazing person at everything?!?! i would kill to be, like, you're pet stalker!! wow, you should sell some of your awesome on ebay. you would earn millions!!
ps. ive written some more poetry, incase youre interested (: thanks
(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-05-22You know Lucy, I feel it appropriate to tell you that I've always had this theory and it goes like this:
I think there are some people who were blessed to be authors.
I think there are some people who were blessed to be poets.
Then, there are the ones who had so much talent thrust upon them that they were given the gift of being both.
You may not have realized it yet, but in my personal opinion you are among the last group.
Author's responseWow. Thank you so much. Like, seriously...that's one of the biggest compliments someone has ever given me- you made my day. Honestly, it's such a huge compliment- especially coming from someone as talented as you.
Thank you so, so much!
- Wow, just... Everything you write is absolutely amazing, you are definately up there as one of my favourite authors :) Its so hard to fing good authors these days you feel you can relate to, and i love that you can go from awe inspiring to frerard to song and poems, and the list grows! You are a beautiful and talented writer, thank you so much for sticking around and creating said literature, it makes me smile with every update, ( or cry ) :) i cant wait for the day you live your dream, bring on the books!
Anyways, thanks so much, and sorry for randomly rambling, i get carried away :)
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