'I just feel dead instead. A ghost that’s ready to go...'
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-05-20 01:21:18 PMYes! I love it! Thank you for updating! I love this story! Please don't spend as long next time, I really hope that you get over whatever it is that's keeping you form writing, you are amazing.
Author's responseAww, you're welcome- thank YOU for reviewing! I did try and update as soon as I could...
Thanks so much for reviewing! :D
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-05-20 02:10:20 PMGee still nasty? I love this story, I got so excited when i saw you updated! I hope you're feeling better now and I can't wait for more chapters :)
Author's responseThank you! I'm glad you like it and thanks for taking the time to review...I'll update as soon as I can :)
(#) MCRkilljoy 2012-05-20 03:05:54 PM:O I would kill to hear what's going on in Gerard's mind right now. Please update soon!! This story is like crack to me!!
Author's responseAh, but that would spoil things xD I'll update as soon as I can and thank you so much for reviewing :D
- Sweetheart, you are perfection. Thank you for updating again. I feel like hiatus was good for this story, because I didn't realize how beautiful it is until I spent some time away from reading it. I love this because it's written a bit like Translations, with the really pretty figurative language, but the tone is more modern whereas Translations feels like it could be set twenty years ago. I like the way each plot fits with your variation of style. And the ending of this chapter was awesome. I love that Gerard was singing Frankie's song, and I like that everything stayed consistent and didn't become super romanticized and cliched after Frank comforted Gee. Thank you so much for updating this story so soon (I was expecting at least two months wait, minimum) after you put it on hiatus. I hope that this means you're also doing well with your out-of-fanfiction responsibilities and issues. And thank you also for posting such a long chapter. I really needed to end my suckish weekend with something awesome, and this was perfect.
Author's responseOhmygod, you've just made my day. Honestly, I'm not even saying that- thank you so, so much for being so constantly supportive and taking the time to leave such a wonderfully detailed and kind review. I love reading your reviews; you're really insightful and I love hearing your perceptions of my stories. I'm also glad you didn't think I made it cliched- I really didn't want to make them all lovey-dovey straight away :L Sorry to hear your weekend was bad...hope you're feeling better now (:
Thanks once more for being so incredibly supportive :'D
- Holy FREAKING CRAP THAT WAS BREATH TAKING, AMAZING, BEAUTIFUL, SUSPENSEFUL, ... I'M SPEECHLESS! I couldn't have asked for better and am almost in years it was so incredible! Of course now i'm dying for what's next lol. Seriously, your writing is out of this world!!!
Author's responseAwwww, thank you so much, honey! :'D You've really made me smile so much...I'm glad you liked it and thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review :)
- ”I still care. I know I do, because I can feel it lodged painfully in-between my ribs, a giant, serrated shard of ice that burns with every breath, tugging, gouging, dragging. Caring always hurts, because you’ve got something you don’twant to let go- but ultimately, you have to let everything go, sooner or later. But that doesn’t mean it’s painless.”
That seriously made me cry. You reminded me of my ex girlfriend, I fucking loved her, and that's exactly how I feel. I still care, even if she hates me.
You're amazing, you really are. This story... It's just perfection. The way you characterized Frank, so vulnerable and self loathing, you just feel for the guy. Ocean, well, I don't really like her all that much. She isn't a bad person, she just doesn't notice how much she can hurt poor Frankie. Mikey is just so timid and... Well exactly how I imagined he would be. Gerard....I just.... I dunno. He's a complicated lost soul here.
Wow. Uhm, sorry, I didn't mean to babble on and in there. I just really love this. I have to say this is my favorite chapter.
And I hope Frank comes to accept his feelings soon. And that Gerard will stop being such an asshole to him.
Author's responseOhhh, sorry I made you cry! D; I know what you mean...I feel similarly with a guy I met last summer, and it's horrible.
Gah, thank you SO much! Seriously, what you've said really means a whole fucking lot. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a lovely, detailed review (they make my week) and I'm so glad you like this! I'll update as soon as I can- thanks again for reviewing :'D
(#) aweirdtree 2012-05-21 04:02:48 AMooooooh, you continued it already! :D i was ready to wait for, like, a month more or something, i don't know. but thank you! you don't know how happy it made me to realize you had updated ^^
this was a good chapter - i serisouly loved it. Frank's just so, so... GAH! these characters are wonderful! i'm waiting for more, as always, so please continue when you can :D
Author's responseI was expecting it to take me longer too! :L You're welcome- thank YOU for leaving such a lovely review :D I'll update as soon as I can!