(#) xXxILoveFrankIeroxXx 2012-06-05I really hate to be mean so I apologize but, I find it hard (becuase I have bad A.D.D) to read SO much detail like you put in. I find myself getting tripped up and lost between paragraphs. Escpecially when characters are talking to eachother; I have to go back and reread because you put in so much detail between replies and I cannot recall what they were talking about or what was last said. Now for the good: I love the story line and I love Robbie's part in this :D can't wait to read on!
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-06-07Sorry I'm so late in reviewing this, been in Cornwall for the past few days and the Internet at my grandvatti's is terrifyingly non-existent. Because, y'know, people care about my opinions so damn much. I really am a very egoiste person.
ANYWAYS, beautifully written chapter. I like the way you introduce just a little bit at a time, although I gotta admit, the suspense is killing me. Me needs more Gerard! And soon! So update quickly. Please?
And thanks so much for your review on 20 Ways. It made my day :3
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