- This was awesome!! It sorta reminded me of one of your current stories, the way it talks about shells and stuff. And this felt very real. You'll have to pardon me for my suckish review, but school ended recently and my eloquence and ability to think about what I'm reading have both abandoned me. I really loved this poem, though. And Cubicles is one of my favorite songs off of Bullets, and I feel like there aren't very many fanfictions based on or relating to that song, which sort of makes me sad. Thanks for writing and posting this!! As always, you are perfection.
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-06-10I think this is my favorite of yours so far; it really spoke to me and I feel that I can relate to it. The rhythm was impeccable, especially with the little four-line stanzas like the one at the start, and it made me give it the entirety of my attention.
Great job, as always! :D
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