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Pile Of Lemons
(#) Spyash2 2013-05-03
I love the story. And after two days of reading, I finally caught up to the latest one (I think?).
I saw that Matatabi and ChÅmei was mentioned, (I was surprised that Kurama fucked them both in the past) and was wondering if they are going to make an appearance?
And if they are, will Naruto/Kurama have sex with them? It'll be interesting to see how that would come out.Author's response
i can tell you right now that it's not the end far from it i had a goal to make Pile of lemons at least 100 chaptersPile Of Lemons
(#) Malefix 2013-06-04
Hinata being his main squeeze is a cold shower for me but fic is pretty good overallPile Of Lemons
(#) The_Quest_One 2013-07-04
Seriously, I have to agree with the other guys. You started it out with Sakura being his girl and he stll loves her then all of a sudden he drops them all to keep fucking Hinata who replaced Sakura out of no where because she's a yandere succubi? That was a terrible cop out and makes this story seem inconsistant. Sorry but if it continues to go that way, I'll just stop reading. Not that there's anything new to read since you haven't updated in months but there are far too many NaruHina centric stories across all the sites as is and its really fucking annoying.Pile Of Lemons
(#) REDTURTEL 2013-09-01
Man add another biju soon. Hinata just boring. And please add new chaptersAuthor's response
actually, amaru ccounts as an jinchuriki, fu and yugito are actually making their apprence in the next chap plus they aso have some of the same ablilties as he does so i'm sure u readers will let themPile Of Lemons
(#) godsbow1 2014-08-05
Great story one of if not the best I have ever read so sad that u never really finished itPile Of Lemons
(#) Joe24 2014-10-06
I am wondering if you intend to continue this excellent story and if so when can we expect a new chapterPile Of Lemons
(#) dylfox2200 2014-12-06
I really enjoy this story. The characters are dynamic, and the modifications to their actual personalities seem believable. The plot however does seem a little cobbled togethee. Im interested if you will be continuing this great fanfic or not. Its been a LONG time since ive seen a new chapter posted. A shame really.
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