Let me out, and let me in.
- I absolutely love the attention to the smaller details. For instance, the cup not crashing. I love this, he seems like an ACTUAL vampire in the traditional sense. I like this a lot.
Author's response:) I'm glad you caught that! I like sneaking things like that in.
That's what I'm aiming for. None of that sparkling BS. ;) Haha, freaking Twilight... It's so hard not to pick on.