(#) BloodyAbattoir 2012-06-14It really sucks to be forgotten.... But this is interesting. I like the personifications you did, you managed to pull it off. But why have the Patient (Black Parade) there if he wasnt going to do or say anything?
Author's responseI'm not sure, I was going to write in something that he was going to say, then I thought, fuck it, people still seem to somewhat like the Black Parade, but not as much as they're into danger days. I thought that I might as well leave him in there, because soon he'll be forgotten like the ones before him.
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