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When your heart begins to break.
8 reviewsCosmicZombie's Music and Words.“Someone once told me, “Y-you only hear the m-music when your heart b-begins to break” and... and I th-think I hear the m-music now. I g-get it, all the l-lyric...
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When your heart begins to break.
(#) Mikeys_Glasses 2012-06-14
I really liked it. It was original, cute, and overall was enjoyable :3
The only part that I didn't like was actually something that Frank said. When he's telling Gerard who took his journal, (CUZ HE'S TO MANLY FOR A DIARY.), and he says 'Jocks' to describe them. Fuck I can't begin to say how much I hate that word. That along with 'preps' >.< I dunno, it just seems so overused and cliche. Yanno, the 'joke pickin' on the Emos" it just is extremely annoying. If he would have said 'those kids that always pick on me' or something, it would be a little more believable. Just saying. I really hope I didn't come of as mean :/ That's just something I despise.Author's response
Heheh thanks for the review! I kinda hate that word too, but I couldn't think of something to replace it, so I stuck it in there. It annoys me too, especially cos I hate stereotypes. I think I may go change it for 'those kids that always pick on me' now...
Megan :)When your heart begins to break.
(#) MissAbbieHudson 2012-06-14
I loved it so much, and my Mum would totally be doing to same thing :')
'It's not spying, it's checking...'
hahah :'DxoxoxoxoAAuthor's response
Hahah my mom leaves me to rot in my room, she's stopped trying to make me come out.
Megan :)When your heart begins to break.
(#) Mikeys_Glasses 2012-06-14
*Instead of joke, I meant jock. Eh, you get it :pWhen your heart begins to break.
(#) xXLaylaxX 2012-06-14
I loved this so much the cutness was just ahhhhfsdfshhhs
THank you!!Author's response
No, Thank YOU!!! :D hehe glad you found it cute... Is it mean that I love making Frank a whimpering, crying mess, just so Gerard can comfort him? lol, it is...
Megan :)When your heart begins to break.
(#) Jacks_Demons 2012-06-14
This one's really cute Megs :) But, why didn't you tell everyone....
That you wrote this in the bathroom
grins evilly
Yep, I just told them that. Don't kill me? Also, it's Ben, the kid has half a brain, what do you expect? Now, I'm going writing fluff. Thanks for the laptop "finally"...
Jack, your favorite most amazing twin :)Author's response
Want me to tell them WHY I was in the bathroom writing fanfic on my phone?
Maybe because someone decided to take the key and /lock me in/. Really? Why, by the way?
And I did pretty awesome considering I used a gammy old vodaphone. So there you go.
Also, at least he has half a brain, Emily only has a quarter. And the laptop was under my pillow the whole time, you should have looked. Your fault for locking me in the bathroom for an hour. Too bad you're such a pussy and let me out when mom came home.
Go write your fluff retard -_-When your heart begins to break.
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-06-16
Awww! :'D This was so touching and sweet- it really tugged at my heart. So sweet and well written- not lacking in description, but not too much either- just the right amount to create a picture in my head. I loved the bit about Frank's Mom at the end. I really enjoyed reading this- it was the perfect balance of fluff and emotion. Loved :'3 Thanks so much for posting this!
Lucy X_OAuthor's response
Thank you :) I had fun writing Frank's mom as a creeper... I can't wait to write the next one! But, erm.... I listened to the song and I kinda couldn't make out the lyrics, so I must listen to it on repeat! :D
MeganWhen your heart begins to break.
(#) ValentineRevenge 2012-06-18
Frankies mum is a creeper... Wow.... But this is so sad but realistic at the same time...Author's response
Heheh I didn't plan for her to be a creeper when I decided to write this, it just kinda.... happened xD
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