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the physical embodiment of lost love.

by Razortotherosary 3 Reviews

Music and words thing. short and not very good.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: Gerard Way - Published: 2012/06/20 - Updated: 2012/06/20 - 373 words

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  • the physical embodiment of lost love.

    (#) Bitch-Bot 2012-06-21 02:37:42 PM

    I think this worked really well. At least, it moved me a littlemade an impression with me :)
    BBxXx

    Author's response

    Thank you so much, i was really nervous about posting it because i'm not very good at writing and ive never posted before so it means a lot. xo
  • the physical embodiment of lost love.

    (#) CosmicZombie 2012-06-25 11:52:59 AM

    Ohhh, that was good! I'm not usually a fan of self-harm type stories, but this one was so simple and so sad it just had to be effective. The ending I thought was especially good; the way you wove the lyrics into the last few sentences worked so well and fitted perfectly with the story. I don't know why, but it created a strong image in my head, especially this line: 'pale skin and jutting bones and a veil of greasy black hair'. I really liked this, good stuff. Thanks very much for posting!

    Lucy X_O

    Author's response

    Thank you so much. It really means a lot. I didnt wanna make it too self harm'y so it was just depressing with no plot so im really glad that it didnt come across like that.
  • the physical embodiment of lost love.

    (#) Coffeeaddict98 2012-06-26 03:37:21 AM

    It's simplicity was beautiful, your use of the lyrics was great! I think that your writing is really effective x

    Author's response

    Thank you so much xo

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