FRERARD! Love was sharp; the blood running through his veins, supplying life, yet slicing, ripping, hacking it apart at the same time. [For Music and Words, 'Blood is Sharp'...Pretty Please Read an...
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-06-22 02:08:55 PMThis was beautiful. It was so sad and depressing yet it still left me with a fuzzy warm feeling.
These latest one shots have all been so wonderful! You should be very proud of your writing- this captured the song perfectly
Author's responseThank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and thought it captured the song. It basically was inspired by everything about the song, from the lyrics to the beat...Thank you very much for reviewing! :D
(#) Coffeeaddict98 2012-06-23 10:46:51 AMAbsolutely amazing, the rain made me think of the music vid for the song. I have a few hours left to enter, so I should get a move on. I'll never be as good as you though, you're a genius Lucy. This was beautiful and full of emotion, it felt as though I was running through the rain, don't delete it! I loved ''debris of his detonation'' I don't know why but I just love that line. x
Author's responseThank you so very much! I'm so glad you thought so, because I was pretty nervous about posting it. Thanks so much for reviewing :D
- This was so moving and emotional. The way you described everything was beautiful I like the fact there wasn't an explanation because I could work it out myself which is always awsome. Your really talented and I hope this wasn't a one shot its oo amazing. Xoxo
(#) Terrehbau5 2013-04-24 11:15:21 PMJust know I love you and everything you do.
This is fantastic and it's fabulously written. You've got a lot of talent and I'm glad I've found your writing or I would've had absolutely no inspiration to get better at writing.
I really like your descriptions of things. I really like your everything here, this is just a 10/10