Mikey's in a mental hospital. He doesn't feel anything anymore and if there's one thing he's learned it's that you should never trust love.
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-06-28 04:25:45 AMOhmygod. How the hell doesn't this have any reviews yet? It's fucking BRILLIANT. And I am in no way exaggerating. Honestly- the way you used words to evoke the right feelings and create the scene was masterful, and you drew me right into Mikey's world from the first paragraph. Your use of writing technique was amazing; your comparison of Mikey and the forest was...Wow; 'In a way, Mikey related to the forest. They had so much in common; they were both so scary but at the same time so scared of themselves that they didn’t know how to act around anyone, anything. They were both dark and uncharted, and, even though Mikey would never admit it, even to himself, they were both very, very lonely.'
Duude, that's amazing! I loved the whole thing; the dark imagery, the agony from one, simple thing. It was just...I could gush about this all day, but let me just say that this is one of the best stories I have read in a very long time.
Author's responseohgod, i mean, what the hell, fucking wow :D thank you! so much! i didn't think it was that good since i wrote it so quickly and everything :D fuck, just, thanks! great to know you liked it (:
(#) Kaleidoscope-Eyes34 2012-07-22 02:18:29 PMWell this is pretty awesome. Well done.
P.S. We mutually follow each other on Tumblr so I consider us friends. ;)
Author's responseohmy, thank you :D and nice considered, one can never have too many Tumblr friends (:
(#) ImJustFine 2012-09-15 12:54:51 PMHow have I managed not to see this until now?! O.O EEEEEEEP. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! [Dies in a pile]
It was absolutely wonderful, the way you made my stomach swoop by adding these WORDS everywhere... Damn, gurl! Can I please just marry your brain?!
Author's responseohgod, thank you! :D you just made my Sunday morning very, very happy ^^ and feel free, i believe my brain is pretty much in love with yours, so there's nothing in their way XD