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she hasn't been here for 10 years... why is it so different

Category: Alice In Wonderland - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Fantasy,Horror - Warnings: [V] [?] - Published: 2012-06-26 - Updated: 2012-06-26 - 466 words

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White Rabbit Is Dead Alice

(#) ValentineRevenge 2012-06-26

New take on the story. This just might be good. I'll have to keep watching this. One thing you might want to do is improve your grammar and break up larger blocks of text into paragraphs to make it easier to read.
White Rabbit Is Dead Alice

(#) YoshikiHide182 2012-06-26

thanks for the comment!
I'll take it on board and use it in the other chapters.It's my first story and i'm only 13 so i was expecting a lot worse than that