Written for CosmicZombie's music and words challenge. Some frerard reference: Gerard is starting to struggle between dreaming and waking.
(#) MissFilthyDivineMCR 2012-06-28 05:30:07 PMThis was really thought provoking! I LOVED IT!! After I read this I went to rate it and sat there wondering if I should rate it insightful or original. In the end, insightful fits it better because you describe beauty in this story. I love stories like this because they have a great meaning to it. BEAUTIFUL!! :DDD Love, Sabrina XOXO ~Stay Beautiful, Keep It Ugly~
Author's responseAh thank you so much :D I'm glad you liked it, I wanted to make it thought provoking so I'm glad you think I succeeded :3
(#) Coffeeaddict98 2012-07-04 10:58:57 AMI loved this! The whole concept was really interesting and original. I thought that it was well written, meaningful and compelling. Were that butterflies inspired by Emily's last scene? x
Author's responseAh thank you very much :D I'm really glad you liked it :3 And actually they weren't, I completely forgot about them in the film :O I just have a thing about butterflies at the moment :')
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-07-18 06:46:31 AMHolymotherfuckingmeeseshit. Okay, so I've read various stories of yours before, so I know your work is of a pretty high standard, but this was beyond that. Your use of dreamlike language fitted the mood perfectly, I loved the whole concept, the not-quite discovered and extremely thought-provoking depth to the story, and well, it's just plain fucking brilliant. I don't really know how I can do justice to it in a review.
I do love your smut stuff (I mean, who the hell doesn't? :L), but I think this might possibly be my favourite thing you've written- although that's just personal; these kinds of mysterious, compelling stories are something I particularly like. It's stunning, with so many fascinating layers and depths, but I think I've rambled and gushed about it for far too long now, so I'm just going to shut up. I hope I haven't bored you to death! :L
Thanks so much for posting this- I can tell it is something that is going to linger very potently in my mind for a long time.
Author's responseWow, thank you so much :') I really wasn't sure if I liked it or not so I'm thrilled you enjoyed it XD You compliment me far too much :')
It was fun to write something different for a change, its been a long time since a song has inspired me so much to write. It was good to break out of the same old stuff (smut...) XD
Thanks again :D