(#) drakenhoff 2006-07-09Yay, Harry and Voldemort non-slash! There isn't enough of this, esspecially not as well written as this. I sense that I definately prefer Filldeserp to the Aurors but that might be my evil little mind :) Just one thing I know that your foerighn and you have been doing a good job of translating but certain sentences just don't flow "the number is quite...fine" the fine just seems a bit strange. " For a moment he thought that Malfoy had some friendships rather... startling" I really struggle with this, the sentence is partially in the wrong order. But these minor niggles asside I really like this story, have you posted it on Fanfiction.net?
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