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Chapter 2

by Parvati-Blossom 3 Reviews

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Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama - Characters: Harry, Hermione, Neville, Voldemort - Warnings: [!] [?] [V] - Published: 2006/07/08 - Updated: 2006/07/09 - 8178 words

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  • River Styx

    (#) drakenhoff 2006-07-09 10:32:42 AM

    Yay, Harry and Voldemort non-slash! There isn't enough of this, esspecially not as well written as this. I sense that I definately prefer Filldeserp to the Aurors but that might be my evil little mind :) Just one thing I know that your foerighn and you have been doing a good job of translating but certain sentences just don't flow "the number is quite...fine" the fine just seems a bit strange. " For a moment he thought that Malfoy had some friendships rather... startling" I really struggle with this, the sentence is partially in the wrong order. But these minor niggles asside I really like this story, have you posted it on Fanfiction.net?
  • River Styx

    (#) Skoell 2006-07-10 07:05:18 AM

    interesting, interesting!
    finally a dark!harry story that isn't soo cliched...
    update soon, plz...

    Question: are you going to make hermione only an understanding former friend or will she, later on, become his toy/prisoner with benefits or something like that?
  • River Styx

    (#) Ppsh 2009-08-20 10:36:13 AM

    Great work. It's a pity the last update was 06. I'm guessing this is abandoned.

    Will put on alert in any case.

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