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Chapter 5: Memory

A little walk down memory lane and someone gets laid. Rate, review, and take a look and see who gets lucky. ;)

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2012/07/10 - Updated: 2012/07/12 - 1387 words

Reviews

• On My Own

  (#) suzettelovers 2012-07-10 06:33:52 AM

  oh sweet jesus, i love it!! Gerard needs to grow a pair and just tell Johanna already!!! its so suspenseful!!

• On My Own

  (#) CyanideSuicide 2012-07-10 09:22:10 PM

  Haha, I love how you added TiffanyRose to be a stripper :)

• On My Own

  (#) Datdatdat 2012-07-11 06:38:06 AM

  Wow. I read through the previous chapters and thought this was really good (though something I wouldn't normally read). Punctuations and capitalization was there. You had very few grammar slip ups. I felt like you knew what your writing style was and had a grip on where this was going. But honestly? That bit about TiffanyRose was childish and uncalled for. Very unnecessary.

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