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A tale of a mosh-pit-romance. LYRICS. Feedback hugely appreciated! :)
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-07-10 09:28:12 AMThis was superb! There's nothing wrong with being jailbait! I must admit, the story sounds like some kind of ficlet, and I think it would make a great one so long as you write it. I trust that you'll turn 'peach' and 'stuffed zebra' into something adorable and amazing, as per usual.
Author's responseThanks! Unfortunately my Nan and Aunt see many things wrong with being jailbait. I'll try to get on the fics as soon as I can (probably do it tomorrow).
Thank you very much for reviewing! :D
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-07-10 09:58:48 AMThis is just so awesome!!! Really! It amazes me how you can turn real life flings into beautiful lyrics like this. Really well done! I would love to see this be turned into a fic. That would be unreal as long as you write it as said by youcanstakemyheart. The fic about 'peach' and 'stuffed zebra' sounds interesting and I can't wait to read it. Glad you are back writing again! ;) You're so lucky you got to see Blink-182!!!
Author's responseThank you very much! I wouldn't call them beautiful, but I am extremely glad you find them to be so. I think I'll definitely turn this into a fic, as with the other one that should be materializing soon.
Blink were AMAZING!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D