We could have those things, I would give you those things. If only you let me.
(#) snake56tongue 2012-07-20 01:57:49 AMWoah. This was beautiful, almost like poetry or something.
And I totally agree, Joncer doesn't get the attention it deserves. There should be more of it! Sadly, no one seems to write it on here, but there are communities for it on LiveJournal if you want to look on there :)
Again, this was beautiful. I loved it :)
Being the angst-lover I am, I preferred the first ending, but I liked how you allowed it to be happy as well :D Great job!
(#) nuttyniamh123 2012-10-30 10:12:09 PMYou don't NEED to become a better writer, you're amazing enough as it is! I loved the whole Alternative ending- thought that was great! Your style of writing is entirely unique, and fucking amazing! Dude, you have a HUGE talent, and I can't express how great it is in words; I'm not as good as you!