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Hoodie

by DisenchatedDestroya 4 Reviews

It's all Pete has left. And he's never letting go. Short PETERICK one-shot. Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: G - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2012/07/15 - Updated: 2012/07/15 - 1379 words - Complete

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  • Hoodie

    (#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-07-15 02:03:04 PM

    Oh, this was so sad.
    I want to hug Patrick now than I did previous to reading this. I could just imagine the whole thing in my head, and I imagine I was making a sad puppy face at my laptop.
    Your stories are so always so well written, and thorough, and just generally wonderful. A lot of people just write sad stories that are vague and sad, and just describe the emotions and give no back story as to what sparked these emotions. But when you write it as you did, then it just makes for an excellently sad Peterick.

    That sounded really morbid..
    OXO

    Author's response

    Sorry about the sadness.
    I always want to hug Patrick. And Pete. And Mikey (but that's irrelevant).
    Thank you very much! It really means a hell of a lot to me that you think so highly of my writing; thank you!

    Thanks for taking the time to leave such a lovely, kind review! :D
  • Hoodie

    (#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-07-15 02:05:05 PM

    Oh, by the way, I was wondering-what did you imagine happening to Pete and Patrick after this? I'm just curious, and I'm not going to be a demanding slutface and request that you continue two different stories, but it's honestly bugging me.
    Sorry for reviewing twice...
    OXO

    Author's response

    I kinda pictured Patrick as killing himself pretty soon after leaving. I think Pete goes insane, like he won't leave the hoodie or the apartment and he won't believe it when anyone tells him that Patrick is gone. Eventually, he will die too. Yes; my head is overflowing with sunshine and rainbows.

    :D
  • Hoodie

    (#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-09-21 05:35:23 PM

    Oh, My, Gee... I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  • Hoodie

    (#) JTlovesgee_frankie 2012-09-28 06:54:33 AM

    it was great i nearly cryed :'(
    P.s you should patricks side to this story it would be great :) plzzzz

    Author's response

    Thank you very much, but I doubt I'll write anything more on this story.

    Thanks for reviewing! :D

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