(#) FrankAIero 2012-07-16The ending was funny. The story however doesn't appear to have a real plot as much as just things happening. The grammar was okay but needs work. The capitalization fails made me cry. Capitalization is one of the main things I care about. Everything else was good. I honestly don't love it, but I don't dislike it. It's kind of just 'eh'. Hopefully you don't think I'm being mean, I'm not trying to be. Just some helpful criticism. Spelling overall was good.
Author's responseTrust me im a capitalization grammar freak the only thing is i write most of this on my phone so it gets hard to do that stuff
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