(#) FrankAIero 2012-07-16 05:32:50 AM
The ending was funny. The story however doesn't appear to have a real plot as much as just things happening. The grammar was okay but needs work. The capitalization fails made me cry. Capitalization is one of the main things I care about. Everything else was good. I honestly don't love it, but I don't dislike it. It's kind of just 'eh'. Hopefully you don't think I'm being mean, I'm not trying to be. Just some helpful criticism. Spelling overall was good.
Trust me im a capitalization grammar freak the only thing is i write most of this on my phone so it gets hard to do that stuff