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Prologue

by DisenchatedDestroya 15 Reviews

Frank's landed himself in it; he's making his own noose. Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero - Published: 2012/07/19 - Updated: 2012/07/21 - 992 words

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  • Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

    (#) xXxILoveFrankIeroxXx 2012-07-19 04:14:49 PM

    OH MY GOD. I... I LOVE THE IDEA.. IF YOU DONT CONTINUE THIS I WILL DIE!

    Author's response

    Thanks! Glad you liked the idea. :D
  • Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

    (#) FantasyMonroe 2012-07-19 04:29:02 PM

    This idea is awesome!! Very, very different which I love. I can already tell this story will be amazing :)

    Cant wait to read more!!!

    Author's response

    Thank you very much! Haha, I hope it lives up to expectations.

    Thanks! :D
  • Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

    (#) tortillachip 2012-07-19 04:32:41 PM

    I think this is great! It was really interesting to read. I thought the description about how much he wished he didn't say anything or the teachers didn't hear and how he was really nervous to do the student-student counseling was terrific. The language was so vivid that I could practically feel Frank's nervousness and his regret of ever saying anything to his teachers. I really liked that even if Frank didn't want the counselor help or the student help, he did kind of know that he had issues. I also really liked how you introduced us to Frank's problem with the paperclip daisy chain. I thought that was really clever and creative. This was really original and written 
    really well. You really did pull me into Frank's world. Great job and I'm so excited to see what's next!!!

    Author's response

    Thanks! I'm glad you found it interesting because I wasn't sure if it was a little too dull, what with there being no actual dialogue yet. It's good to know that you thought the bit about his nervousness worked out alright; I really wanted to get across how he was feeling, all his regret about ever opening his mouth. The paperclip daisy chain just kinda popped into my head when I couldn't think of how to start this, so I'm glad you thought that worked out alright as an opener.

    Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a kind and detailed review! :D
  • Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

    (#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-07-19 05:27:51 PM

    I loved it!!! I can't wait to see what happens next, update soon please!!!

    Author's response

    Thank you very much! The next part will probably be up over the weekend! :D
  • Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

    (#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-07-19 05:58:12 PM

    EEEEE! NEW CHAPTER FIC! YOU DON'T KNOW HOW EXCITED I AM ABOUT THIS!
    The concept is great and original, as your writing usually is. Poor Sparky :( at least he didn't actually explode or something..
    Love this and can't wait for you to update!
    OXO

    Author's response

    Hehe, good to know you're as excited about this as I am! ;D
    Thank you very much! And yeah; poor Sparky, even if he did make it out alive.

    Thanks! :) :) :D
  • Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

    (#) MisfitKid7 2012-07-20 06:12:32 AM

    Oh mah gee! This is such a good idea and Im betting the storys gonna be amazing! Update soon =) xo

    Author's response

    Thank you very much; I hope the story does turn out to be alright! I'll probably have the next chapter up either tomorrow or Sunday.

    Thanks for the review! :D
  • Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

    (#) NotKissingYouGoodBye 2012-07-20 07:49:47 AM

    Totally cool idea, i so can't wait for the story:)

    Author's response

    Thanks; the first proper chapter should be up by Sunday at the latest, maybe tomorrow. :)
  • Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

    (#) GeorgiaMCRlover 2012-07-20 09:45:44 AM

    Aw this is great! Can't wait to read more :)

    Georgia xo

    Author's response

    Thanks; more will be up soon! :D
  • Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

    (#) CosmicZombie 2012-07-20 10:16:30 AM

    Meep. This story is utterly frankable. Love the idea, and it's already made me giggle :3 I've never read a chaptered fic of yours before, but this one promises to be as good (although very different) as your songs and poems. Can't wait for your update- this is added to my alerts ;D

    Lucy X_O

    Author's response

    First of all: Frankable = my new favorite word.

    Thank you very much! Normally I suck at making giggle-worthy writing, so I'm glad you think it's working alright in that department. I hope this chaptered fic lives up to your expectations!

    Thank you very much for such a nice review; it really does mean a lot! :D
  • Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

    (#) PartyPooperX 2012-07-20 10:48:34 AM

    What an idea, and already headed off for a good start. I'm interested, this is heading straight to my alerts!

    Author's response

    Thank you very much! :)

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