(#) japulapu 2012-07-28 08:36:08 AM
Fantastic. It was fun reading it. I'm glad you have the ending figured, even if it is not entirely grounded. I never got bored, but it did drag a little in the middle. I'm just glad you're back in business. I love your style of writing. I like how you manage to incorporate humour even in the serious and awkward situations. And I found it funny that you mocked yourself within your own fiction. It's not a bad piece of fanfiction. It's quite lovely. No grammar or spelling errors I noticed. It was an interesting update.