"Why aren't you scared? Why aren't you avoiding me now that you know my deepest, darkest secret?" *FRIKEY*
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-07-31 11:33:44 PMI liked it.
It was cute, and wasn't too slow. It was a little fast, but I like stories that are a little fast in some parts. Plus it's not unbelievable.
The only problem I had was when you said Gerard was a year above Mikey, but then you said Mikey was 7 when Gerard was 10. Or maybe I misread that somehow.
Anyway, I liked it and I'd love to read more! :) Please update, I wanna see what happens with Frank and Mikey.
Author's responseThank you! :3 I know it was a little fast, but I was originally intending for it to be a oneshot. I had absolutely no idea how to end this, so I just decided to make it chaptered.. I'm glad you liked it!
(#) RyanCyanideKiller 2012-07-31 11:38:55 PMIgnore Heartbreak_Beauty, she's just been pissy.
I liked this, but I agree with the review above me. It did go a little fast, but the plot and dialogue were good. I'd love to read more.
Author's responseThanks so much! :D BTW I really love your stories :3