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Apollo squad

An involuntary alcoholic, a rising child celeb, a doubting teen, an aging rebel mobster and the perfect civilian. See as they unite in an adventurous tale that will make even concrete seem to spark...

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/08/06 - Updated: 2012/08/06 - 190 words - Complete

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• Apollo squad

  (#) aweirdtree 2012-08-08 04:27:54 PM

  nice one :D i like how it's different to your other poems and still just as good (: thanks!

  Author's response

  Thank you :) I actually built it on a rhythm that I've heard a lot in music, so I guess you could say it's a lyric without a melody :P

• Apollo squad

  (#) AdnarimSmada 2012-08-17 10:43:58 PM

  Ah, we all have our problems, the same ones no doubt no matter how different we seem.
  
  I like how you brought out how universal that concept is.
  
  -Adnarim Smada

  Author's response

  Thank you :) And the think that I think drove me the most is the ever returning feeling of insignificance as a person, the feeling that I alone can't do anything if I don't have support or a reason that overshadows the fear of being trampled down by the masses. I guess you could call it cowardice, but it's not really the same, I think. It's been returning in a lot of my poems lately and I've been thinking a lot about what it means...

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