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Milky way blues

by ImJustFine 2 Reviews

It's there, you just can't see it with your blinds down...

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/08/06 - Updated: 2012/08/06 - 184 words - Complete

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  • Milky way blues

    (#) aweirdtree 2012-08-08 04:30:49 PM

    "in the veins of the houses" THIS FUCKING THIS. PERFECT.

    yeah... thank you! it's amazing (: and, seriously, especially that line... goddammit. idk, it just strikes some chord in me, apparently :D tack!

    Author's response

    Tank you :D And it just seems so obvious that the electricity would be within the veins of the houses, I mean, it kinda keeps them alive, you know? I've always though of it like that... Kiitos :)
  • Milky way blues

    (#) lunette 2012-08-10 05:46:47 PM

    Wow, this is beautiful. I love it.

    Author's response

    Thank you :)

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