Phil gets to Australia and surprises Dan but Dan lets something slip and things happen. Please remember I don't write this alone and my co-writer is amazing. I am Dan and she is Phil.
- Dramatic. Wow. Way to let it slip Dan.
Awww Phil wants to rescue him :3 adorable
Could you guys consider spacing it out into paragraphs and maybe noting that it's about to switch (on way or another, maybe even just a dash or something small like that) because that's a tad confusing. First we're with Dan then it randomly switches to Phil. Love this story though.