This first chapter is for informational rather than entertainment purposes. So just hang in there :)
- I like this story. The information that you put in this informational chapter has the potential to become something really awesome. I'm not sure where it's headed, but it will be pretty damn good. Also, let me tell you that I haven't read a story where the author gives you the info you need up front, and then you plunge into the story. It's different, usually they kind of explain it on the way, or using flashbacks. I'm not sure how I feel about the way you did it, but you did it well, so I'm gonna go with it for now. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's responseThank you for this review and all your other ones that got deleted when I switched over to chapters :)