"What is this exactly?" Throttle asked.
(#) whipblade 2006-07-14 09:52:00 AM
I defantly like how you've written around the episode 'Cavent Mentor' Wonderful ^_^ stratagy too.
I like the Throttle X Stoker slash ^_~
Can't wait for more! and the çatatonians'involvment too!
Still waiting on Red Planet to be finished ^_~
(#) Dapple 2006-07-19 12:43:21 PM
Mmmm, yeah, this chapiter feels kind of rushed, I understand what you mean when you say that you thought you limited the story by putting it within only one episod.
You manage to keep the tension between Throttle and Stoker though (kudos) and I just love Modo in this part!
The end is splendid too.
The first part seems to be kind of dislocated. Does it happen before or after Throttle and Stoker leaves the garage?
(#) Phyrbyrd 2007-01-03 05:48:57 PM
Ah, my sweet, you just reminded me why I used to like slash. I can give you no higher praise for such a sweet story. Well done - don't stop writing, will you?