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Anaesthetized
3 ReviewsHe should be breaking into uncountable, bloodstained pieces. But he wasn't. [Oneshot]
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Anaesthetized
(#) Bella_Jinxx 2012-09-06 12:40:10 PM
Lucy, I don't know HOW you do it, but every time you write something, it captures my feelings. It describes what I feel like. It strings together the words in my head that I could never get down. I love your beautiful use of language, it's stunning and adds a striking reality to the whole thing. The picture you painted in that oneshot was so bleak, and blank, but then you realize- the world is rather bleak. Your writing adds colour to that greying world. Write more! I'm in the process of finishing a chapter for my collab, then I'm writing the next chapter for a new fic, then I have to write another one. But whenever A new piece of your work comes out, I'll read it. And by God, I'll love it.
xoClaire -
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(#) amos222 2012-09-06 07:58:53 PM
I love your writing so much. Every word just carries so much weight, and they pull me under so deeply that I have trouble surfacing afterwards and writing any kind of intelligent sounding review. All of that intensity makes it almost difficult to string together lesser words to describe it. I don't know that I'll ever really show you how I feel about your stories for that reason.
On a different note, thank you for having the courage to write this down and post this online. I read fanfiction every day, but I never post any because I'm too afraid of criticism. But you have no fears. You just spill some dark, deep shit all over a word document and stir it around until it all makes too much sense, and then you present it to the world like "Here it is". I hope you realize that your writing is so perfect. I really, really do. Don't ever doubt it. And please don't ever stop. -
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(#) Mirazal 2012-09-06 08:30:02 PM
Wow.... you're an uncomprehendingly amazing writer. + infinity for ambiance. Seriously.