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Harry Potter and the Sisters Black
Harry is captured by Voldemort, but manages to escape with some unexpected help. Now he just has to deal with the consequences.
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Harry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) OmegaDVD 2010-05-26
First seriously what is with your fascination with someones back door or butt hole. This whole story seems to be centered around everyone getting a burrito or a butt plug up there back door. Second I am 100 percent sure harry does not use ebonics (lets be about it) I have read a lot of story's and this is the first one I have ever seen with ebonics (lets be about it) in a number of chapters. Third one of the chapters is a certified train wreck one paragraph is repeated twice and thats the end of that chapter. The first sentence in most chapters are repeated twice with the occasional AN in the middle between the repeated lines. There are also big english grammar problems. I am sorry if you think this is a flame in truth its not but you do have a lot of work to do to clean this story up and I might add find another sexual activity for the story other than there back door or butt hole. SorryHarry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) motthew 2011-01-05
i orinagily found this story on a difrent site .I want to ask to write some storys about this idea. if i post them i will give youcredit in all of themHarry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) motthew 2011-01-05
i orinagily found this story on a difrent site .I want to ask to write some storys about this idea. if i post them i will give youcredit in all of themHarry Potter and the Sisters Black
(#) Kairou 2014-03-15
interesting read. although i think the story could have done with less focus on Anal sex and more on each of the girls distinct Fetish's
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