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Chapter Forty - Black Eye

by McrmyBVBparawhore 4 Reviews

Acid sighed heavily. It hadn't gotten any easier. Not at all.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2012/09/15 - Updated: 2012/09/15 - 2042 words

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  • The World Is Ours

    (#) junebug03 2012-09-15 01:48:03 PM

    Wow really poison? He just keeps getting worse and worse. Poor little bandit :( I'm glad acid punched her in the face now she just needs to hit poison :D

    Author's response

    I feel sorry for Bandit too, she just seems to be stuck in the middle of it all.

    I really wanted Acid to punch her at some point, so I'm glad I got to put that in there ^_^

    Thanks for reviewing!

    -Mxo
  • The World Is Ours

    (#) Chemical_30 2012-09-15 05:10:55 PM

    Poison is being a stupid asshole and in starting to not like him at all...
    Grrrr please make things better soon haha

    Author's response

    Aw, I'll try, but I'll admit I do have a few things planned first...

    Thanks for reviewing!

    -Mxo
  • The World Is Ours

    (#) YoshikiHide182 2012-09-16 11:55:56 AM

    I swear to god if i was there when poison came in and started to shout at acid i would of tried to kill him...them Phoenix...maybe at the same time (teehee)This stories getting better and better as it goes along.PLEAZZ UPDATE SOON XX
  • The World Is Ours

    (#) YoshikiHide182 2012-09-16 11:57:12 AM

    No seriously when it come's to poison.l.URGE TO KILL RISING!!

    Author's response

    Haha! I thought about making Acid punch Poison too, but I thought it might be a little too much... who knows, maybe I'll make her punch Poison too at some point ^_^

    And thankyou, I was worried that people would start losing interest since not a whole lot is going on at the moment. Thanks for reviewing!

    -Mxo

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