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Goal Not Achieved

by Kaleidoscope_Eyes 1 Reviews

Just a poem I wrote last year.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2012/09/17 - Updated: 2012/09/19 - 23 words - Complete

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  • Goal Not Achieved

    (#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-09-20 10:59:45 PM

    Nice. It was really short but worked that way. I like how the first two lines were single words and then you built up the rest, it made the last line really powerful.

    SF

    Author's response

    Thanks! I'm glad you thought so. Thanks for taking the time to review!

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