- "... waiting to be bitten... ,to be devoured, to be taken into the darkness by the train headed to hell called Seto Kaiba."
Whew! That was very nicely done! I appreciate the above bit of original description. It fits Kaiba perfectly and offsets the, somewhat, predictable nature of a vampire fic.
(#) IlovetheCoreys 2010-08-12This is brilliant! Very well-written, too.
And I agree that Kaiba and Joey make such great vampires, too. After all, they both have a strong sense of arrogance, cunning and being able to adapt, high level of intelligence and perception, mysterious, magnetic and charismatic, social and sexual dominance and power of seduction and sexual attraction, among other things.
Anyway, this is really fantastic! :) I like it.
Keep up your awesome, super-cool, very brilliant and creative writing! :)
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