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Too Little Did You Notice, Too Late.

by BipolarUnicorn 3 Reviews

Poem type thing-y. They never noticed, but when they finally did they were to late. .

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/09/17 - Updated: 2012/12/03 - 110 words

They don't notice. 
They don't notice I'm giving up.
They don't notice the way I barely eat. 
They don't notice the way I think about myself.
They don't notice that I'm always faking my smiles. 
They don't notice they way I hide behind my attitude. 
They just don't notice fucking anything.

Same question everyday;

"What's wrong?"

Oh nothing

When will they notice? 

Most likely, when I give up completely.

If they find our sooner, I know what will be coming; 

"Don't give up." 

Already did. 

"Let us save you." 

Too late. 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

A/N: I was MIA there for awhile wasnt I? Schools a drag, I'm gonna go learn some Spanish. 
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