[Written for Cosmic Zombie's music and words.] Frank needs to just get out of the numb haze and start seeing things from a different point of view.
(#) XxSearchAndDestroyxX 2012-09-25 03:29:58 PMI am in love.
Every bit of the story was perfect.
It is my favorite story on this website.
The feels... :D
Just Omigod. Its beautiful.
Author's responseOh my God, thank you :O
I'm really glad you liked it, just... wow, thanks :D
- This just about made me cry!!! Jesus this was so well written, I wish more people had moments of clarity like Frank & Gee had in this story!! The world would be a much better place don't ya think!!! Good for you girl this story will touch a lot of people!!!
I wish the band could read it, I think they'd love it!!
Author's responseOh wow, thank youu :) I really didn't think it was anything that special, but I'm so glad you guys think so :D
I think if the band read my stories they'd just be really creeped out XD
- I loved this. You portrayed the emotions perfectly, and your descriptions were amazing. I also loved the hints of Ryden! :D But overall, I'm just in love with your writing style; you're one of my favorite authors on this site. Thanks for the great read!
Author's responseAh thank you :D I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-11-27 11:33:39 AMOh wow. I had high expectations for this after reading your previous Music and Words entry, and this completely lived up to those expectations. It was such an interesting concept to take, and you executed it really well- you went into such depth with your characters, it was very insightful.
I loved the fact that nothing bad happened to him for Frank to realise what he wanted- most stories would have been different in that sense. Both Frank and Gerard’s characters were very real and deep, and I was honestly just so touched by the whole story. There was something very moving and profound about it which I can’t quite put my finger on.
Oh, and that last line? That was perfect. Thank you so much for submitting a story again- it’s always such a joy to read your work. I’m sorry it’s taken so long to read and review this; I’ve been very busy with exams at the moment, but it’s still no excuse. I really hope you’ll try and do the next entry, and thanks for this, it’s really made me think a whole lot.
Author's responseOh wow, thank you :') I'm so glad you liked it xD I wrote the whole thing pretty quickly, and to be honest the whole time it felt like my thoughts were all over the place and it was a race to get them down so I'm really glad it actually came out coherent :')
We've all been busy bees with work and exams and all that good shit, so no worries about the time :P I'll definitely try and keep doing the challenge :D