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Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

Cronus's powers are getting a tad bit stronger each week, and Jay tells the team about it. The team is shocked, and Cronus gets the Spartoi Warriors ready. After the encounter with the Spartoi Warr...

Category: Class of the Titans - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/07/15 - Updated: 2012/04/26 - 925 words - Complete

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• Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

  (#) Mary-Lane 2006-07-19 04:42:01 PM

  You're getting better with your stories.
  =)
  And I like how you made Archie the hero.
  Although you use the same lines for AxA a lot.

  Author's response

  Well, thanks for the kind words. Be safe.

• Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

  (#) Busterdog282 2006-07-26 09:47:22 AM

  Mary-Lane is so nice I agree with her !
  your stories are getting better but liek my idea

  Author's response

  Don't you think youre being too nice?

• Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

  (#) Busterdog282 2006-07-26 09:47:29 AM

  Mary-Lane is so nice I agree with her !
  your stories are getting better but liek my idea

  Author's response

  Yeah..... but I still don't get why such a superb writer as yourself would get so bad rating.

• Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

  (#) dana 2006-07-28 09:58:54 AM

  TOTALLY AWSOME FLUFF! loved it, loved it?!

• Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

  (#) dana 2006-07-28 09:59:02 AM

  TOTALLY AWSOME FLUFF! loved it, loved it!

• Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

  (#) dana 2006-07-28 09:59:04 AM

  TOTALLY AWSOME FLUFF! loved it, loved it!

  Author's response

  OH YEAH!!!!

• Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

  (#) EilayAdnayVolieay 2006-07-29 05:58:41 PM

  This was a decent story, but I do have some words of advice that you can take or leave, its entirely up to you but it will hopefully help you if you decide to take it.
  
  Reading this story was hard on the eyes because everything was basically together--- when a new person speaks, try starting a new paragraph, that way its not all clumped together. It doesn't seem like it should make a difference, but it does for some reason, I don't know why I've just noticed it.
  
  Other than that, all I can say is keep writing and practicing--- practice doesn't really make perfect but it does help people get better and because nobody's perfect, there's always room for improvement regardless of how well one person does.
  
  Overall, not a bad story, keep working on it.

  Author's response

  Really?

• Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

  (#) CotT Lover!! 2006-08-19 01:54:45 PM

  its a good story but confusing

• Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

  (#) dancechickie222 2006-08-22 11:33:23 PM

  you are getting better but i couldn't finish reading it. i tried but the stories are just so... ughh! i cant read anymore of it plz stop.

  Author's response

  long?

• Cronus's failure (AGAIN!!)

  (#) eros_cupid 2006-09-20 04:47:38 PM

  Wut do u think?

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