Frank, stuck in Purgatory. Will he prove himself worthy for a chance to go to heaven or hell and be reunited with Gerard, who is still living?
(#) itachi6959 2012-10-04 07:50:25 AMThis is such a fresh idea I love it!!! And poor Frankie aww~
Keep it up=]
Author's responseThanks, I'm glad you liked it. The italicized part in the beginning are lyrics from a song I absolutely love. I kinda came up with this from that one line. :) Yeah, Frank is having a pretty shitty afterlife.
I'll try my hardest to do so!
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-10-04 09:38:49 AMDamn, this is good. It's so great to see a fresh plotline for a fanfic too; this has the potential to be really interesting. Well-written and intriguing, you have me hooked. I like how you were detailed, but not too detailed about Frank and Gerard's relationship- it's made it kinda mysterious, and I want to find out about what happened. Please update soon, I really want to read more!
Author's responseThanks, I'm happy to hear you liked it. :) The plot is pretty original, isn't it? I'm actually quite proud of it; for once I actually felt it was a great idea. Hopefully I keep it interesting, though. I'm kinda planning out the plot little by little, so we'll see. My story was well-written? Really? I always think my dialogue is flat and kind of robotic-like and my descriptions are not detailed enough. Total confidence booster right there. :) Ah, the relationship. You'll discover more about it as the story progresses, as well as the whole pact and such.
I'll update as fast as I can. School is all I've had time for and it's a wonder I was able to post this. But with luck, I might post the next chapter this weekend. Thanks for reviewing!
(#) SyraStrange 2012-10-07 05:35:05 PMHe didn’t mean to, right? Of course he didn’t, he would never do that. After all, he is my boyfriend. And boyfriends don’t do that; everyone knows that.
NO FRANK I DON’T CARE ANYONE CAN HURT ANYONE. BOYFRIENDS ESSPECIALLY. I mean, this is just… gah. If you let someone in, if you let someone so close to you, it’s like you’re playing with fucking fire, if you’re careful, it won’t hurt you, but if you slip up, SHIT MAN YOU’RE ON FIRE.
(here we go, Syra trying to make a point all special and moving and FAILING spectactularly)
I remember he whispered to me that he’ll always love me no matter what, and I almost said it back.
D’: MY FEELINGS.
Man, you’d best update this. It would literally HELP MY HEALTH AHKADBJJBADSIHYSAKLADJ.
p.s. – Can you believe I didn’t know how to do the italics and bold thingy until now? Wow, I’m actually way stupider than people think, AND THAT’S SAYING SOMETHING.
p.p.s. – OK TAKE ME OUT JUST CAME ON SO I FEEL SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW
p.p.p.s. – oh my god, shut up Syra, water you doin. STOP.
Author's responseJeeze, Frank is sensitive right now, buddy. Deep stuff there, but...Frankie. :3 (You did NOT fail. Okay? Okay.)
I'M SORRY. I DIDN'T KNOW IT WOULD MAKE YOU FEELS.
I really wish I could but school is just ugh. I REALLY WANNA HELP WITH YOUR HEALTH.
p.s- Aww, Sweets, it took me a while to figure it out too. YOU'RE NOT ALONE.
p.p.s- BY FRANZ FERDINAND? I KNOW DAT SONG.
p.p.p.s- NO SYRA. DON'T STOP. (and that sounds kinda wrong xD)