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Without the mask....where will you hide?

-HIATUS- a delicious challenge fic, takes place after the first movie, but before the second. Lets get this train wreck a rollin....

Category: Pirates of the Caribbean - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance - Characters: Elizabeth, Jack, Will - Warnings: [!!!] [V] - Published: 2006/07/17 - Updated: 2006/07/17 - 691 words

Reviews

• Without the mask....where will you hide?

  (#) uppsydaisy 2006-07-17 10:11:41 PM

  Sounds like an interesting premise. I hate to tell you this but you broke rule number 5 three times in the first paragraph. That is something that really throws most readers right away. I skimmed through the rest and my eye caught several more spelling errors. Your phrasing was fine and your vocabulary was impressive but if things aren't spelled right, the reader can miss your meaning. Find a beta reader you trust and ply her with virtual chocolate so that she will catch them before you post. Keep writing! (There can never be enough Cap'n Jack fic!)

• Without the mask....where will you hide?

  (#) arisu's smile 2006-07-18 05:27:34 AM

  mwahahaha... yes, yes, this pleases arisu...
  
  but seriously, this is a great start, herki. just don't make me cry anymore over the spell-check deal ^^
  
  WRITE MORE DARN U!!
  much love,
  arisu's smile

• Without the mask....where will you hide?

  (#) arisu's smile 2006-07-20 05:30:57 AM

  lol, i can completely see jack doing that, nearly killing himself and all he can say is "not good" or something like "bugger" lol. ah, but yes, you need to write more!!
  
  ~arisu's smile

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