He had, in a dark corner of his mind, wondered if everyone he cared about would die, and the last thing he would hear from them would be a plea for Anakin. A plea to save him. For he knew he would ...
(#) JesusKetchum31 2005-07-02 10:00:22 PMAnd this fic reminds me of why I always liked Obi-Wan... that is, I identify with him. This is absolutely beautiful. However, it's also absolutely riddled with distracting typos. You should consider getting a beta reader to catch that stuff. Still, good job.
(#) SkywalkerChild 2005-08-18 12:58:07 PMYou know, I only read the summary, so I thought I was going to get an Anakin/Vader dynamic. If only I'd read the characters in question...still, I liked it. Although not Obidala myself, I understand it. A few typos here and there, but otherwise a well put together and touching story.
(#) Ticklesivory 2006-07-17 12:10:18 PMI came to read this on the recommendation of a friend at the Obidala Fan Forum located at http://obidalaalways.proboards56.com/index.cgi
I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this fic. I haven't been touched by an Obidala fic in a long time. : )
This was absolutely wonderful. I invite you to come to our forum. I truly believe that the members there would greatly benefit from your expertise and talent.
Looking forward to seeing you there and reading more wonderful Obidala works from you!
Sincerely ~ Ticklesivory
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Author's responseThank you so much! It's an honour to hear from the Queen of Obidala. :) Sorry to have taken so long to reply to you; my Internet sucks ass. :P