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A Queen Cried

He had, in a dark corner of his mind, wondered if everyone he cared about would die, and the last thing he would hear from them would be a plea for Anakin. A plea to save him. For he knew he would ...

Category: Star Wars - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Amidala, Obi-Wan - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2005/06/04 - Updated: 2005/06/05 - 1061 words - Complete

Reviews

• A Queen Cried

  (#) JesusKetchum31 2005-07-02 10:00:22 PM

  And this fic reminds me of why I always liked Obi-Wan... that is, I identify with him. This is absolutely beautiful. However, it's also absolutely riddled with distracting typos. You should consider getting a beta reader to catch that stuff. Still, good job.

• A Queen Cried

  (#) SkywalkerChild 2005-08-18 12:58:07 PM

  You know, I only read the summary, so I thought I was going to get an Anakin/Vader dynamic. If only I'd read the characters in question...still, I liked it. Although not Obidala myself, I understand it. A few typos here and there, but otherwise a well put together and touching story.

• A Queen Cried

  (#) kenobifan 2006-07-17 11:03:12 AM

  This story was ...well, it just tore at my heart strings...
  
  I enjoyed the read! :)

  Author's response

  Thank you very, very much!

• A Queen Cried

  (#) Ticklesivory 2006-07-17 12:10:18 PM

  I came to read this on the recommendation of a friend at the Obidala Fan Forum located at http://obidalaalways.proboards56.com/index.cgi
  
  I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this fic. I haven't been touched by an Obidala fic in a long time. : )
  
  This was absolutely wonderful. I invite you to come to our forum. I truly believe that the members there would greatly benefit from your expertise and talent.
  
  Looking forward to seeing you there and reading more wonderful Obidala works from you!
  
  Sincerely ~ Ticklesivory
  Fanfiction.net Obidala author
  Administrator of The Obidala Fan Forum
  Webmistress of Obidala ~ Always

  Author's response

  Thank you so much! It's an honour to hear from the Queen of Obidala. :) Sorry to have taken so long to reply to you; my Internet sucks ass. :P

• A Queen Cried

  (#) PadmeKenobi 2006-09-01 06:31:17 PM

  Ohh, I loved it! Absolutely beautiful! It made me sad, tear Wonderful job!
  OBIDALA FOREVER!! teehee.
  Padme out.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much! :)

• A Queen Cried

  (#) kenobifan 2006-10-19 04:19:23 PM

  Will you write more Obidala? Please!!

  Author's response

  I will try my darnedest! Being busy sucks. :)

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