(#) JesusKetchum31 2005-07-02And this fic reminds me of why I always liked Obi-Wan... that is, I identify with him. This is absolutely beautiful. However, it's also absolutely riddled with distracting typos. You should consider getting a beta reader to catch that stuff. Still, good job.
(#) SkywalkerChild 2005-08-18You know, I only read the summary, so I thought I was going to get an Anakin/Vader dynamic. If only I'd read the characters in question...still, I liked it. Although not Obidala myself, I understand it. A few typos here and there, but otherwise a well put together and touching story.
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