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A Queen Cried

by Aerin 6 Reviews

He had, in a dark corner of his mind, wondered if everyone he cared about would die, and the last thing he would hear from them would be a plea for Anakin. A plea to save him. For he knew he would ...

Category: Star Wars - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Amidala, Obi-Wan - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2005/06/04 - Updated: 2005/06/05 - 1061 words - Complete

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  • A Queen Cried

    (#) JesusKetchum31 2005-07-02 10:00:22 PM

    And this fic reminds me of why I always liked Obi-Wan... that is, I identify with him. This is absolutely beautiful. However, it's also absolutely riddled with distracting typos. You should consider getting a beta reader to catch that stuff. Still, good job.
  • A Queen Cried

    (#) SkywalkerChild 2005-08-18 12:58:07 PM

    You know, I only read the summary, so I thought I was going to get an Anakin/Vader dynamic. If only I'd read the characters in question...still, I liked it. Although not Obidala myself, I understand it. A few typos here and there, but otherwise a well put together and touching story.
  • A Queen Cried

    (#) kenobifan 2006-10-19 04:19:23 PM

    Will you write more Obidala? Please!!

    Author's response

    I will try my darnedest! Being busy sucks. :)

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