Prompt Word: Goodbye.
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-11-13 12:41:06 PMThat was beautiful. Your poetry has a lovely rhythm; poetry is often really difficult to be rhythmic without rhyming, but yours really was. This was so sad and so relatable...I loved your use of language and the chorus bit about not seeing scars. This line was my favourite; 'The lights shone down much too much and I melted.'
I really enjoyed reading this- this poem really spoke to me.