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Untitled Number One

Prompt Word: Goodbye.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/11/13 - Updated: 2012/11/13 - 244 words

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  (#) CosmicZombie 2012-11-13 12:41:06 PM

  That was beautiful. Your poetry has a lovely rhythm; poetry is often really difficult to be rhythmic without rhyming, but yours really was. This was so sad and so relatable...I loved your use of language and the chorus bit about not seeing scars. This line was my favourite; 'The lights shone down much too much and I melted.'
  
  I really enjoyed reading this- this poem really spoke to me.
  
  xo

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  (#) BipolarUnicorn 2012-11-13 02:45:03 PM

  I absolutely loved this, it was amazing and so beautifully written. This really spoke to me, I really can't compare to this.
  
  I'm just at a lost for words, seriously.
  
  Abbie xx

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  (#) KelseyChem 2012-11-25 09:07:40 PM

  Ohmyword, that was ridiculously gorgeous ;~;

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