Naruto lives his life the way he knows best.
(#) Last_Deadly_Sin 2006-07-21 12:36:30 PMI thought it was very interesting! Original too! I gotta wonder where the idea for this came from, abd think it is very insightful for you to have written it.... I like it very much! ^^ I guess I can't say that enough, ne? lol I especially loved the parts about Sunday.... and then in the end where it mentions him not going back on his word.... ^^
(#) Sunshine and Puppies 2006-09-17 11:56:57 PMHad a feeling about your fic. Almost skipped it, but then went back and read it; glad I did.
Interesting progression. Characterization, I think, was good. Opinion on first viewing, could be wrong. No convention errors immediately popped out.
Have a nice evening.