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Secret Phoenix Feathers

by CosmicZombie 3 Reviews

Count our heartbeats to new beginnings.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2012/11/30 - Updated: 2012/12/12 - 369 words


  • Secret Phoenix Feathers

    (#) CoffeeAddictForLife 2012-11-30 11:40:47 AM

    It’s definitely more song-like, and I really liked it. Honestly, every line is fascinating; thought-provoking, however simple- how do you do it ha?! Saw a few words that whacked my sub-conscious and my messed up mind started playing songs from the The Used, but kept reading without a tune, (pressed mental mute button) and it’s beautiful. Could see it being played.. or just read. Love these pieces, keep writing!

    Author's response

    Thank you very much! You know, most of the time, I actually think it sounds kinda silly, so I'm really glad you think it's thought-provoking! xD I'm really glad you liked it, and I really appreciate you taking the time to review- thank you! :D

    P.S. The Used are so awesome. :'D
  • Secret Phoenix Feathers

    (#) Mirazal 2012-11-30 03:24:31 PM

    I can actually imagine the music to this, it would be really nice.

    This is really amazing. Wow.
  • Secret Phoenix Feathers

    (#) AshIsNotOnFire 2012-12-01 08:37:33 AM

    This is stunning, Lucy! I love the use of language, and the flow, and oh god. It's beautiful. :)

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