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Excellis University
2 ReviewsCollege!Fic. A guy at the coffee shop seems a little down, and of course Ryan takes notice. (Revised... finally)
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Excellis University
(#) japulapu 2012-12-10 12:01:17 PM
Let me start off by saying that was absolutely brilliant. I don't read Rydon, but that rocked. It was quirky, natural, slightly cliché, but I enjoyed it all the same. I love Ryan's personality. It reminds me of one of my favourite comedians, Simon Amstell. If you don't already know him, you should check out his stand up entitled, 'Do Nothing'. That sounded so formal. But I really loved the chapter. Can't wait for more! -
Excellis University
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-12-12 12:41:57 AM
Okay, I'll be honest, there were a few grammatical mistakes that ruined it for me slightly, but other than that it wasn't too bad. You've got me interesed now, I will admit, so I'm looking forward to the next update to see what that will bring. :)Author's response
This was written on my phone during lunch periods, so there are mistakes I haven't had time to fix. Sorry.